# Novel-in-a-Day XI - the undecaNiaD

**URL:** <https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806>\
**Category:** Novel in a Day\
**Created:** [September 14, 2021, 5:40pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806 "2021-09-14T17:40:49Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 20\
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**Author:** ![CeramicFairy](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/ceramicfairy/32/17136_2.png) [@CeramicFairy](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/CeramicFairy)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 1:29pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/284 "2021-10-16T13:29:21Z")

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Is quite beyond the help of another cup of tea?

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**Author:** ![CallyRose](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/callyrose/32/18337_2.png) [@CallyRose](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/CallyRose)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 1:38pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/285 "2021-10-16T13:38:03Z")

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So way beyond that 😬

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**Author:** ![Susan67](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/susan67/32/18936_2.png) [@Susan67](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/Susan67)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 1:46pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/286 "2021-10-16T13:46:06Z")

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@pigfender So i can name him etc?

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**Author:** ![Susan67](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/susan67/32/18936_2.png) [@Susan67](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/Susan67)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 1:56pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/287 "2021-10-16T13:56:13Z")

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rocking back and forth more like!

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**Author:** ![pigfender](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/pigfender/32/41516_2.png) [@pigfender](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/pigfender)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 1:56pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/288 "2021-10-16T13:56:23Z")

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Absolutely. Given him whatever backstory etc you like.

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**Author:** ![Camy](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/camy/32/36_2.png) [@Camy](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/Camy)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 2:01pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/289 "2021-10-16T14:01:03Z")

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This was Novel in a Week, wasn’t it? 😬

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**Author:** ![Rdale](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/rdale/32/15925_2.png) [@Rdale](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/Rdale)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 2:17pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/290 "2021-10-16T14:17:01Z")

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For a moment of levity, one of them could slip and address someone as “Sarg” instead of the customary last name used with equals and subordinate ranked soldiers. Then the rest could tease him about his slip-up for a bit.

“Sarg, where’s my shaving cream?”  
“How should I know… Sarge?”  
“Screw you.”  
“Hey, Sarge, Sarge here’s looking for his shaving cream!”  
“Don’t look at me, Sarge, this luxurious beard ain’t seen a razor for a spell.”  
“Ya’ll are a-holes.”

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**Author:** ![Camy](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/camy/32/36_2.png) [@Camy](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/Camy)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 2:21pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/291 "2021-10-16T14:21:58Z")

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> [@Rdale](#):
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> “Sarg, where’s my shaving cream?”  
> “How should I know… Sarge?”  
> “Screw you.”  
> “Hey, Sarge, Sarge here’s looking for his shaving cream!”  
> “Don’t look at me, Sarge, this luxurious beard ain’t seen a razor for a spell.”  
> “Ya’ll are a-holes.”

I like this, muchly! 😀

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**Author:** ![Kingstonmike](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/kingstonmike/32/17142_2.png) [@Kingstonmike](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/Kingstonmike)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 2:33pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/292 "2021-10-16T14:33:57Z")

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Gotta be honest…REALLY struggling with this chapter, guys.

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**Author:** ![homeport](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/homeport/32/17766_2.png) [@homeport](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/homeport)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 2:35pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/293 "2021-10-16T14:35:19Z")

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go for it send me one please

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**Author:** ![mishmhem](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/mishmhem/32/18058_2.png) [@mishmhem](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/mishmhem)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 2:38pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/294 "2021-10-16T14:38:24Z")

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Okay, this scares me… I think I’m done. This means I"m going to go take a nap and look at it again when I’m freshl- currently at 3351 words

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**Author:** ![doolols](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/doolols/32/18312_2.png) [@doolols](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/doolols)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 2:51pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/295 "2021-10-16T14:51:14Z")

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Are you saying we _can’t_ have any kissing?  
There has to be a market for a gay military thriller, surely?

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**Author:** ![pigfender](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/pigfender/32/41516_2.png) [@pigfender](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/pigfender)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 2:55pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/296 "2021-10-16T14:55:10Z")

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If you want dancing, kissing or swimming with dolphins in your chapter, that’s your call! 🙂

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**Author:** ![doolols](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/doolols/32/18312_2.png) [@doolols](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/doolols)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 2:56pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/297 "2021-10-16T14:56:01Z")

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@Susan67 Is that a prescribed ratio? I’m way down on target. 🍷 🍷

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**Author:** ![pigfender](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/pigfender/32/41516_2.png) [@pigfender](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/pigfender)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 2:57pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/298 "2021-10-16T14:57:10Z")

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For those looking for some words of encouragement…

FOUR HOURS TO GO!

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**Author:** ![doolols](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/doolols/32/18312_2.png) [@doolols](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/doolols)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 2:57pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/299 "2021-10-16T14:57:48Z")

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What about language? Any ratings applicable? F bombs allowable? (That’s as far as I’d go)

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**Author:** ![Kingstonmike](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/kingstonmike/32/17142_2.png) [@Kingstonmike](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/Kingstonmike)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 3:07pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/300 "2021-10-16T15:07:37Z")

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It’s the Army…F bombs are like vowels to them…

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**Author:** ![Kingstonmike](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/kingstonmike/32/17142_2.png) [@Kingstonmike](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/Kingstonmike)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 3:08pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/301 "2021-10-16T15:08:35Z")

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> [@pigfender](#):
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> For those looking for some words of encouragement…
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> FOUR HOURS TO GO!

That isn’t encouraging…Anxiety-inducing, maybe…

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**Author:** ![homeport](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/homeport/32/17766_2.png) [@homeport](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/homeport)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 3:19pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/302 "2021-10-16T15:19:54Z")

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Anxiety levels shooting through the roof what is Dehmari in appearance???

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**Author:** ![Camy](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/user_avatar/forum.literatureandlatte.com/camy/32/36_2.png) [@Camy](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/u/Camy)\
**Post date:** [October 16, 2021, 3:20pm UTC](https://forum.literatureandlatte.com/t/novel-in-a-day-xi-the-undecaniad/122806/303 "2021-10-16T15:20:40Z")

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> [@mishmhem](#):
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> currently at 3351 words

I think I hate you! That’s so not fair.  
Can I have those you decide not to use, pretty please.

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