Dear Fluff,
Would a cold wet flannel help Vic-k? Especially if it came with a scantily clad ‘nurse’?
Dear Vic-k,
We are discussing how screenwriting technique can help or improve writing a novel. Pigfinder was proving an example of the pitfalls.
Dear Miss Stacey,
I’m afraid, anything with a scantily clad nurse attached to it, would prove counter productive where his Lordship is concerned. He’d end up overheating and hyperventilating, before crumbling in a heap at the poor woman’s feet.
Take care
Fluff
This isn’t the “Scrivenings” section where we post some of the work we are most proud of for comment and critique?
I mean yeah I knew that. Juuuust illustrating the pitfalls. Yessir.
Pitfalls my tooty, Herr Schweinkotflügel. Showing off, more like, albeit to good effect. 
Vic-k
P.S. that mousehound should be muzzled!
P.P.S. As for scantily clad nurses, Miss Stacey: 'Bring ‘em on!’, I say, 'Bring ‘em on!’
Actually, I’d probably buy this … 