The book looks fantastic! There’s one glaring omission on the title/cover, though…I don’t see ‘Vol. 1’ anywhere! Thanks for coordinating this. It was a lot of fun and I hope we see the call go out for Vol. 2 material in 350 days, give or take.
It’s a long standing tradition at this point for me to say “never again”.
While planning “vol 2” …
No one has accused you of being 100% committed to consistency.
I think we got it spot on the first try. No need to bring sequels into this.
Next year: The Cookery Book Murders
The Pumpkin Spice Murderesses.
The Gochujang Massacre
Horrible Holiday Emu - Stories to Make You Fear Australia
Hmm. How about: - ‘Emu and the Dolphins; Rum Raiders Extraordinaire.’
Gators, Emus and Dolphins - the rise of the devils triad.
The Gators’ Stalking; a Croc of Shit.
I am, of course, in no way implying or suggesting and certainly not promising that there would be any follow up – in fact let me reiterate that there are absolutely no plans to ever do anything like this ever again.
But, because I’m a sucker for feedback…
If you were me what would I, I mean you, or, well… we do?
- Villa Diodati 2 should be more ghost stories
- Villa Diodati 2 should be a different genre
- Future story collections should be a different genre and name
- I don’t mind either way, but make sure you invite me
- “I have utterly no idea what you’re talking about. Please, God, don’t ask for my input.”
I like Villa Diodati for ghost stories; dunno that I’d like it for, say, a cosy mystery or a romance or a hard-bitten detective romp.
I prefer reading and writing short stories, compared to long stories. Any short story in a day or two suits me. I’ve never forgotten reading those of Guy de Maupassant.
What about a Limerick in an Hour for a future event? Multiple submissions allowed. Here’s one of mine for a Burns Supper - the day is coming.
“The Burns night supper was tearsome
For the Haggis was awfy fearsome
It chased the piper
Until a sniper
Shot it up the rearsome”
Excellent!
“Hoots, lassie. Your rearsome is lookin’ awfa fearsome.”
Slap.
I preferred this event to our traditional NIAD format. I wouldn’t say it was less stressful exactly, but I liked knowing the genre in advance and being able to write a complete story.
I only signed up for it about a week before submission date, and discarded several ideas and half written stories, panicking that I’d never be able to finish anything.
In fact, I only started writing it on Thursday, when I suddenly had a brainwave and remembered that Shakespeare wrote several plays with ghosts.
So I started rereading Hamlet, which I had studied for A’level many years ago. The ghost speaks to Hamlet, so I thought: what if the mc is a girl called Harriet who speaks to her mother’s ghost? I had no idea what the story would be about, apart from that, and I didn’t find the ending until Saturday night.
I love the book that we’ve all produced and the many brilliant and diverse interpretations of the genre.
In the process I learnt that planning ahead doesn’t work for me. Instead, the characters need to reveal the plot.
I’m planning to do Nanowrimo, and might write short stories instead of a novel for this one.
I’d be interested to hear how everyone else came up with the idea for their ghost story and what they learnt from this process.
Enjoyed your story v.much. I loved Harriet: “Oy Mary! Wake up!”
I agree that knowing the genre upfront helps, and I think it would help with NIAD too – just so that you can get your head in the right space before kick-off.
Shakespeare’s an interesting start-point, I went with folklore, but it’s the same idea: to get the ball rolling.
re planning: Philip Pullman says to write the story first, then plan. I’ve come to agree with him. I absolutely, 100% agree with letting the characters reveal the plot. For a short story – as we’ve just done – that’s not so hard, but it’s trickier with a novel because of scale. But if you take an iterative approach – and can keep everything under control – then you can develop such richness and depth. In the short story form, which I don’t usually write, I found it refreshing to be able to show everything and tell nothing; leaving it to the readers’ biases, er, imagination – and cultural norms – to fill in the blanks.
I noted my backstory for this event up-thread, but the biggest lesson was how much story you can fit into so few words if you just let the reader fill in the blanks. I didn’t start out with that idea, but as things developed, it became a fun project: 1,000 words to tell a story with a beginning, middle, and end, and three arcs.
Let’s have love stories next. I’d love to see more prescriptive happily ever afters. Not the sarcastic Gone Girl type where it’s only a HEA on paper but not in actuality. Valentine’s Day
I was a student at a college known for its ghost stories, and one of my favorite high school texts was an unforgettable prescriptive ghost story. So I merged both concepts. I learned that nothing is new under the sun.
@auxbuss Hi! I’m really glad you enjoyed it!
I’ve just reread your story, and am now researching Dunmail as I had never heard of this folklore. Your story is scary - all those spooky watchmen, and poor Damon, what a way to die…
Re Philip Pullman, I remember his advice to school children doing their SATS where he said (something like) your teacher will tell you to write a plan before you write your story, but that’s a waste of time because your story will never match your plan; so write the story first and then your teacher will be impressed that your plan exactly matches your story.
I think that’s excellent advice as characters never do what they’re supposed to.